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Tribute to Invader Zim Tribute to Invader Zim

Rated 4 / 5 stars January 29, 2008

Jhonen Vasquez would be rolling in his grave...

...laughing his fool head off! Would that be RIHGL?

Anyway, kudos to you. [hands you a candy bar] [what, no one remembers that brand?]



culex17 culex17

Rated 1.5 / 5 stars January 25, 2008

meh

A cute idea, but it needs more...something. More cards would be good; I suggest having several in one flash, with slideshow controls or pause/play.

I like the card choice; the art, dark-type, and stats fit culex17 well. May I recommend adding a 'flip effect', since it is a 'monster/effect' card; 'flavor-text' about the person, or what they'd be like in the game universe, would be great!

Best of luck!


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Valhalla Knights Valhalla Knights

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars January 25, 2008

WONDERFUL!!

An excellent beginning! I rarely review, but this is so well done I don't wish to pass it up.
Excellent symbolism, foreshadowing, and most of the other 'art critic' stuff. The transitions are classic. Even the humor with the chief was a nice touch! One thing I especially liked: giving some information to bring an understanding of the characters and situations, not so much nor in a way to slow the 'flow' for too long and bore us, yet barely enough to create curiousity and interest. (No, I'm not an English teacher!)

The sound quality, especially of voices, could be better, and SOMETIMES I see better clarity of drawing. Either one certainly would have brought a 10 -- which I almost rated anyway!

Best of luck; I hope your future endeavors are at least this professional, and that future chapters are in store!


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May Dress up May Dress up

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars January 25, 2008

So-so

Some of the clothes are good choices, and most of the others are okay for various tastes. i don't mind the fixed undies because of the warning in your comments; but PLEASE fix it so they end up UNDER things like the swimsuits!

Best of luck!



Love Dating Sim for Girls Love Dating Sim for Girls

Rated 5 / 5 stars August 15, 2006

Yay Bomee!

Wonderful! As sensible and sexy (tho w/out the sex) as TehKar, as cute as Kerrigan, and as gutsy (yet not annoying) as Foamy!!!

Thoroughly entertaining, especially if you can stand no porn and
no more violence than "Stop poking me!" Maybe I have a new favorite flash-er(?! sorry, flash-creator), after I look into her other subs and the story she made this for... (finding out how to impress those dates while I'm at it!)

Only two ways I'd think it was EVEN BETTER:

-even more variation under the "conversation" options and "talk to friends"--maybe connected to game progression?

-she does have a pussycat; could she play with it? maybe a mini-game, animation, or accessory to go with the dress-up (or a separate collection of minis related to Cup of Tea)? The innuendo alone would be funny, not to mention silly! (I can't wait to help her play with her ...kitty!) Basically, more jokes like "sex on the beach" would be great next time!


Bomee responds:

oh i love you! great suggestions! and wow, thanks for the comparisons *though um illwillpress and legendaryfrog don't know i exist or would care, lol!*

i love these suggestions and will definitely use them in the next game! thankies so much!!